Wednesday, 31 May 2017

Heart vs Brain - Chapter 2

           Hello everyone am back! Am back overwhelmed and super happy with the response that you all gave me after my first chapter... Thank you so much everyone and I can't express how great full i am to all of you for the reviews and praises you all showered me with. I was so nervous when I posted the first chapter but now for this one it feels better... And the credit goes to you all... Although am a bit nervous but much less than the last time... Thank you again and go on to read the story.

                                Chapter 2

*CID beauro*

            ACP sir was sitting in front of his desktop and staring at the screen actually at the wallpaper... The wallpaper in which two of his most precious gems were smiling... Those gems which were stolen away from him, stolen away by a thief called destiny... The only thief even ACP Prayduman failed to catch hold of!

(Just then Dr. Salukhe entered the beauro and went to ACP sir and saw him staring at the photo of duo set as wallpaper of his desktop)

Salukhe - Kitne din un dono ki taswiro ko dekhte rahoge

ACP - (without looking up from the desktop) Inn taswiro ke alawa kuch bacha bhi kaha hai salukhe... (sighing) Inn taswiro se hi kaam chalana padega ab

Salukhe - Tum kabse haar manne lage prayduman... Mai jis prayduman ko janta hu na, usne ajj tak kabhi haar nahi mani

ACP - (finally looking at Dr. Salukhe) Harne ke baad jitne ki ummed rakhne ke kya fayeda?! Nakul ke baad abhijeet aur daya mai apna beta dekha tha maine... Nakul ko meri duty ne cheen liya aur abhijeet daya ko unki duty ne

Salukhe - Daya ko kuch nahi hoga prayduman... Ummed mat haro... Tum hi toh kehte ho na daya CID ka sher hai... Kitni baar maut se lad chuka hai woh aur har baar jita hai, iss baar bhi zaroor jitega... (patting ACP sir's back)... Bas apne app ko mazboot rakho aur uska saath do... Humara daya hume chod ke nahi jayega

ACP - Har baar ummed rakhta tha mai kyuki mujhe vishwas tha ki daya hum sab ko chod ke nahi jayega... Lekin iss baar... Lekin iss baar dar lagta hai ki woh abhijeet ke paas chala gaya toh? Hum sab ko chod kar apne boss ko chun liya, toh hum kya karege?!

Salukhe - Aisa kuch nahi hoga!!!

ACP - Khir tum batao, kisi kaam se aye the?

Salukhe - Nahi bas yahi puchne aaya tha ki beauro ke baad hospital jaoge na?

ACP - Haa jauga... Kyu?

Salukhe - Mai bhi saath chaluga... Daya ko bhi dekh lunga aur doctor se bhi kuch baat karni hai daya ki progress ke bare mai

ACP - Theek hai saath chalege... Mai tumhe pick karne lab aa jauga

Salukhe - Okk... Phir mai chalta hu... Zayda sochna mat, kuch nahi hoga daya ko... Bye

(ACP sir after biding good bye to Dr. Salukhe glanced at his desktop, smiled seeing duo's picture and started with his work)

*Unknown place*

(In a dark place there was one man sitting on the chair... Four to five men were standing around him... There were some bottles thrown here and there, some oil spilled on the floor and a tyre was hanging in the one corner with the help of a chain... A table was kept in the middle of the room and some desi kattas were kept on it... Even some blood stained knifes could be seen kept on the table... The only source of light in that closed room which made all these things barely visible was a small bulb hanging in the middle)

Man 1 - Sab ready hai boss

Man 2 - Haa boss ab apan log kabhi bhi apne plan ko anjam de sakta hai

Man sitting on the chair (Boss) - Sab chize ek baar phir se check karo... Kisi galti ki gunjaish nahi honi chahiye

Man 3 - Nahi hogi boss, iss baar koi galti nahi hogi

Man 4 (to man 3) - Jab tak tu humare saath hai, kabhi bhi koi bhi galti ho sakti hai

Man 3 - Dekh mera dimag kharab mat kar... Agar meri satak gayi na toh tera kya hoga yeh tu soch bhi nahi sakta

Man 4 - Abbe tu karega kya? Ha? Kya karega tu! Uss daya ko tak toh mar nahi paya... Samne khada tha woh humare! Phir bhi zinda bach gaya

Man 3 - Haa theek hai zinda bach gaya lekin 2 mahino se coma mai pada hai... Zinda hokar bhi mara hua hi hai naa!

Boss - Chup ho jayo tum dono!!! Problem kya hai tum dono ki hamesha jagadte kyu rahte ho

Man 2 - Toh boss ab aage kya karna hai?

Boss - Intezar! Sahi waqt ka intezar... Ek baar bas upar se order aa jaye phir humare plan ko anjam denge

Man 1 - Theek hai boss... Apun baki sab ko bhi bol deta hai tayar rehneko

Boss - Hmm... Chalo niklo abhi tum log

(All the 4 men left)
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            A man was lying on the bed... So many life equipments were attached to him... His body motionless and his face expressionless... Eyes closed and face pale... The only sign that he was alive was the heartbeat monitor in the room. Another man was sitting beside him... He was holding the hand of the previous one in both his hands... Holding it so delicately as if holding his whole world in them

Freedy - Daya sir ab bas bhi kijiye na... Aur kitna intezar karwayege hum logo se! Kyu pareshan kar rahe hai app hume? Pata hai sir beauro mai bilkul man nahi lagta appke bina... Mai toh ab atmao ki bate bhi nahi karta... App naraz ho jate the na! Mai appse wada karta hu sir ki ajj ke baad kabhi atma ka naam bhi nahi lunga... Please sir uth jayena...(with tears in eyes) Meri nahi toh baki sab ki toh suniye! Appko pata hai pankaj na ajj kal koi bachpana nahi karta... Purvi aur tarika koi gossip nahi karti... Salukhe sir kisi se nahi jaghdte... Bilkul chup chap rehte hai, sirf apna kaam karte rehte hai... Kisi ki taang nahi kichte... Aur ACP sir! Unhone toh jina hi chod diya sir... Bas hospital aur beauro... Na waqt par khana khate hai, na sote hai... Bas apna kaam karte hai aur appko aur abhijeet sir ko yaad karte rehte hai... Ajjkal unke files ke bich app dono ki photos ka album bhi hota hai... Hum sab ko toh aise dikhate hai jaise woh bohat strong hai lekin mujhe pata hai sir ki woh bhi rote hai, akale mai... Jab bhi hum puchte hai unke khane-pine ke bare mai toh keh dete hai ki abhi bohat kaam hai baad mai aur unka baad kabhi aata hi nahi hai... Der raat tak beauro mai kaam karte rehte hai aur roj subah jaldi aa jate hai... Unhe lagta hai ki hume kuch nahi samjhta, lekin sir hume pata hai woh apne app ko kaam mai busy bas isliye rakhna chahte hai ki appki aur abhijeet sir ki yaad na aaye... Sir kisi aur ke liye nahi toh unke liye toh uth jayena please

            But there was no response from the other side... Daya was still lying on the bed as if all these things didn't affect him or as if he didn't even hear them... But there was someone else listening to all these words... From behind the slightly open door of the hospital room... Someone who's eyes were continuously​ shedding tears... His eyes fixed at his brother's face and ears ringing with Freedy's words... After listening to the condition of his teammates his heart was burdened with another guilt... Guilt of taking away all the happiness from his family... Guilt of all the tears of Freedy and the guilt of giving so much pain to his ACP sir. Just then he heard some steps approaching him and looking at that direction he found Dr. Salukhe and ACP sir coming towards him or better say towards Daya's ward... Taking a last glance at his brother and praying for his fast recovery he covered his face with a scarf he ran towards the exit.

To be continued...

             Who was that 'he' in the first chapter ka answer dhund rahe ho? But chapter toh katham ho gaya! But don't worry i will tell you all... That 'he' the same man who was standing there outside the hospital ward... Wanna know his name? Chalo aur pareshan nahi karugi it is none other than our beloved Abhijeet sir... Many of you guessed it correct. I know so many more questions are running in your mind like if Abhijeet sir was there on the beach and outside the hospital ward then why do ACP sir and Salukhe sir considered him dead? If he is alive then why is he running away from them? Why is he thinking of himself as guilty of all these? Those goons were discussing about what plan and what did they do to Daya sir? Many more but ajj ke liye ek answer kafi hai... For other answers wait for the further chapters and keep reading.

Sunday, 28 May 2017

Heart vs Brain - Chapter 1

             Hey guys wondering where i disappeared? Kisi ne CID ko toh nahi bula liya na! Nahi bulayega hoga and that's why they are still not here searching for me. Nahi toh our beloved CID team doesn't take this long to find someone. I was actually working on a new idea! An idea to write stories, obviously about CID! What do you guys think about it? Should I write or no? To make your choice easy am presenting before you all my first work of fiction.

                                Chapter 1

            Standing on the shore he was staring at the vast sea... Moon shining bright in the sky between the crowd of stars... Waves touching his feat and returning back into the ocean... Cool breeze making his silky hair messy but he seemed least interested in setting them back... The only thing that was disturbing the silence of the night was the sound of the waves but they were incapable of disturbing his thoughts... Motionless he was standing there, his face showing no expressions but only he knew what feelings he was going through... His usually intense eyes were filled with pain tonight... His courageous heart was filled with guilt and his sharp brain failed to find a way out of it... Suddenly his brain started to play some of the most beautiful memories of his life

"Jab tak tera yeh dost zinda hai na koi goli tumhe chu bhi nahi sakti"

"Dost toh hum bhi hai tumhare, hume toh kabhi koi gift nahi diya"

"Agar zarurt pade toh yaad karna, dost nahi bhai hu tumahara"

"Tum na apne poto ko apne darwaze todne ki kahaniya zarur sunana... Aree tum kya mai sunauga"

"Abhijeet tum mujh par kabhi goli chala hi nahi sakte"

            Those smiles, those laughs that they had together... The bullets and that anger that they beared for each other... Those eyes he couldn't see pain in and that man for whom he could fight the whole world... His friend who was more precious than his own life for him... These memories which were his most valuable possession were nothing else but the reason why his heart ached today... He remembered his face, his bestie's, his Daya's face and the smile which used to bring a smile on his face brought tears in his eyes today... A tear rolled down his left eye on his cheek and it brought him back from his thoughts... He stared at the watch in his hand not to see the time but because it was his brother's only sign with him... Brother's?! Yes brother's! He was much more than a brother to him... He moved his hand on that watch slowly, feeling his Daya's presence in it... He remembered why and how this watch reached him

                             *Flashback*
(Abhijeet and Daya were arguing over something... Meanwhile Freedy came in between)

Freedy - Kya hua sir? App dono jaghad kyu rahe hai?

Daya - Yeh abhijeet ki wajh se!

Abhijeet - Meri wajh se kya! Maine kya kiya? Apna wada tum todo and galti meri! Yeh kaha ka insaf hai

Daya - Toh tumne cheating ki thi!!!

Abhijeet - Aree maine konsi cheating ki! Shart tum haar gaye aur ab tumhe apna wada pura karna he padega

Daya - Dekho abhijeet... (Started daya)

Freedy - Sir koi mujhe batayega ki konsi shart? Kaisi shart?

Abhijeet - Achaa theek hai chalo ab freedy hi decide karega ki kon sahi hai aur kon galat

Daya - Okk... Done

Abhijeet - Dekho freedy, hua yeh ki maine aur daya ne shart lagayi thi ki ajj ACP sir beauro mai kharab mood se ayege... Mai keh raha tha kharab mood se ayege and daya bol raha tha nahi ayege... Aur ajj ACP sir ka mood subah se khaarb hi hai... Matlab mai shart jeet gaya!

Freedy - Haa toh sir isme problem kya hai?

Abhijeet - Problem yeh hai ki daya manne ko tayar hi nahi hai ki woh har gaya

Freedy - Kyu sir?

Daya - Kyuki freedy, subah ACP sir ne mujhe phone kiya tha kuch kaam se aur woh kafi ache mood mai the, isliye maine kaha ki ACP sir achee mood mai ayege... Ab ACP sir ki DCP sir ke saath meeting hai beauro ane se pehle yeh mujhe kya pata!!! Us DCP ne ACP sir ka mood kharab kar diya hoga hamesha ki tarah!

Abhijeet - Toh isme meri kya galti ki tumhe nahi pata... Baat bas itni hai ki tum shart haar gaye

Daya - Freedy ab tum hi batao kaun sahi hai kaun galat!

Freedy - Sorry daya sir but abhijeet sir shart jeet gaye

Abhijeet - Dekha! Chalo ab shart mutabik mujhe apni woh new ghadi do

(Daya removed his watch and gave it to Abhijeet)

Daya - Lo! Freedy tumhe toh mai dekh lunga baadme
                         *Flashback ends*

          Remembering that one of the many sweet and salty fights he smiled... Smiled with tears in his eyes! Just then he realized that he had spent many hours at the beach and he had to return back home! Home? No it was not a home for him it was only four walls wherein he went to sleep... Taking a deep breath he tried to calm himself down although it was not possible and he knew this but just to show the world he wiped his tears, set his messy hair and walked off from there, to start another day, another war and to face another challenge that he knew was on its way.

To be continued...

            Thinking who is that 'he'??? Most of you must have guessed it! If not keep thinking!
            So everyone here is the first chapter of my first ever work of fiction. Please do tell me what you feel about it. Do feel free to point out my mistakes so that i can improve them. Am no professional writer and so i know that i must have made innumerable mistakes. I just tried to do something my heart told me to. I have no idea about how it is. Now it's up to you all to rate my work. And yeah most importantly do tell me if you want me to continue or not? It will be your decision and not mine about the future of this story.