Am back! I know am late but am back within a week as i promised. Can't help it! Studies you know... Still sorry to keep you all waiting. Chalo now first read the chapter and then i will see you all in the end...
Chapter 6
(Daya was lying on the hospital bed with closed eyes. Pankaj who was there with him at that time thought that he was asleep and nurses thought the same too. But he was awake. Wide awake and thinking something deeply... Thinking about how everything changed within some months. And thinking about why Abhijeet fired on him! Before trying to figure out the answer to this 'why', he was trying to figure out his own feelings.)
Daya (in his thoughts) - Sab ko keh to diya ki galti se nikal gaya abhijeet ka naam mere muh se lekin mujhe pata hai ki sab ko iss baat pe shak ho gaya hai... Aur ACP sir, woh toh iss baat ki teh tak jane ka faisla bhi le chuke honge! Magar unse pehle mujhe sab kuch pata karna hoga... Lekin kaise? Kyu kiya abhijeet tumne aisa! Kyu goli chalayi mujhpe? Pata hai koi toh wajh hogi, bata toh dete. Tumhare liye toh apne app ko goli maar lu mai... Baas ek baar bol kar toh dekhte abhijeet! (Tears formed in his eyes but no one could see them... He didn't realize and the only one who could see through his closed eyes was the reason behind those tears) Kyu apni hi maut ka natak kar rahe ho tum? Kyu sabse chupne ki koshish kar rahe ho? Maine toh sab ko kaha tha ki 'Abhijeet nahi mara... Mera dil kehta hai' lekin kisi ne vishwas nahi kiya. Achaa hai nahi kiya vishwas... Kam se kam sab log tumhe meri halat ka doshi toh nahi manege. Agar team ko pata chal gaya toh woh tumhe arrest toh nahi kar lenge na!? Attempt to murder ke jurm mai! (The very thought shook him to the core... He didn't want Abhijeet to be arrested, he never wanted this to happen... Not even if Abhijeet had attempted to kill him) Kuch toh karna padega! Kuch bhi karke mujhe tumhe iss musibat se bahar nikalna hi padega.
(Even after Abhijeet fired on him all that he thought about was how to save Abhijeet... No wonder why people say friendship is the strongest relation in the world. The one who attempted to kill Daya was crying and prying for his recovery and the one who had a bullet wound was thinking about how to save the one who gave him this wound! Even the brothers from same mother, who share the same blood, nowadays don't have such a pure relation... But these two shared one! Why? Because this relation was made by heart and not by blood. Not destiny but they chose each other.)
*Beach*
(Here on the seashore Abhijeet was sitting on a rock. Trying to figure out his own problems)
Abhijeet (in his thoughts) - Thank you so much God thank you so much... Daya coma se bahar aa gaya! Isse zayada kushi ki baat aur kya ho sakti hai mere liye. (Suddenly a thought came to his mind and his forehead became sweaty) Kahi daya ne ACP sir yaa phir team mai se kisi ko bata toh nahi diya ki uspar maine goli chalayi thi! Aise toh unhe pata chal jayega ki mai zinda hu! Nahi mujhe daya ko rokna hoga... Kaise bhi karke mujhe daya ko team ko batane se rokna hoga. (Moving his hand on his watch or better say Daya's watch that he took from him) Am sorry dost tujhe thodi aur taklif uthani padegi... Mere liye! Am sorry! Mai kuch nahi kar sakta
Determined! After a long time Abhijeet felt the strength in himself to be determined... After all his 'strength', his 'daya' was back in his senses... Although not near him but who needs to be close when they can be one another even when they are miles away... But he didn't know that his Daya hadn't told anything to the team! He was as determined as him... Because he wanted to save his Abhijeet... Once again! From the whole world!
(Sitting there on the rock without realizing Abhijeet got lost in the flashback again)
*Flashback*
Few days after Abhijeet received the letter from Rajeev, Abhijeet started investigating the case. He went to the resort where Rajeev heard the terrorists talking... Enquired, checked and did every possible thing. He had not informed the team about all this and was doing it secretly.
One fine night he was going back from a crime scene to his house. It was a long way and passed through the jungle. He was alone in the car and was moving swiftly on the empty road... It was past midnight and the already not so busy road was deserted now. Suddenly he saw a huge tree fallen on the road blocking his way. The sharp mind of Sr. Insp Abhijeet started working instantly...
Abhijeet (talking to himself) - Na barish hai na hawa chal rahi hai toh yeh jhaad raste pe aise kaise gir gaya... Kuch toh gadbad hai... Bina wajah itna bada jhaad nahi gir sakta
He started looking around without coming out of his car but couldn't see anything suspicious... But suddenly he heard a vehicle coming from behind... Looking back he saw a truck with uncontrollable speed coming towards his car. He was quick enough to react... Putting his car in back gear he moved behind and took a U turn... But to his surprise even the truck took a U turn and started racing behind him. By then he had understood that the truck was there for him or better say to kill him! Showing his excellent driving skills Abhijeet started racing on the road... The car which was previously moving at a speed of 50 - 60 was now moving at a speed of 90 - 100... He was escaping the truck well but didn't know that this was not all that the criminals had planned for him... There came some another 5 - 6 cars from no where and started moving with his speed. But again its not so easy to outwit the second in command of CID Mumbai! He once again proved the power of his car and excellence of his brain. Escaping all of them he was racing ahead. But he didn't have the slightest idea that the culprits must have also blocked the way he came from and after a while he saw another huge tree on the road blocking his way! Behind him were the criminals chasing him and in front, his way to escape was blocked completely. Running into the forest was useless as he knew that the people who planned so much for him would have already made their goons sit in the jungle waiting for him... But he knew what to do!
He put his car in back gear once again... Moved some distance behind, kept his foot on the accelerator... Pressed it hard... Attained a high speed and dashed his car into a tree! There was a huge crashing sound but all he could hear was silence... He felt a hot fluid flowing out from his head... Pieces of glass pricing all over his body... The tips of his fingers and toes turning numb and eyes denying to open... The last thing he remembered was that those cars which were chasing him, came, checked that he would die in no time with all those injuries and left saying 'Yeh toh kudh hi mar gaya re'
To be continued...
Upar maine jo bhi Abhijeet sir ke saath kiya uske liye sorry! App log mujhse naraz ho usse pehle hi sorry... Kya karu even i I didn't want to do any such thing with our beloved Abhijeet sir but it was important for the story, so i had to do it.
Now am done with my work and now it's your turn to do your work. You all know na what am talking about? Review! Next update will come next week till then enjoy this one... Keep watching CID and let me enjoy your reviews. Bye!
Chapter 6
(Daya was lying on the hospital bed with closed eyes. Pankaj who was there with him at that time thought that he was asleep and nurses thought the same too. But he was awake. Wide awake and thinking something deeply... Thinking about how everything changed within some months. And thinking about why Abhijeet fired on him! Before trying to figure out the answer to this 'why', he was trying to figure out his own feelings.)
Daya (in his thoughts) - Sab ko keh to diya ki galti se nikal gaya abhijeet ka naam mere muh se lekin mujhe pata hai ki sab ko iss baat pe shak ho gaya hai... Aur ACP sir, woh toh iss baat ki teh tak jane ka faisla bhi le chuke honge! Magar unse pehle mujhe sab kuch pata karna hoga... Lekin kaise? Kyu kiya abhijeet tumne aisa! Kyu goli chalayi mujhpe? Pata hai koi toh wajh hogi, bata toh dete. Tumhare liye toh apne app ko goli maar lu mai... Baas ek baar bol kar toh dekhte abhijeet! (Tears formed in his eyes but no one could see them... He didn't realize and the only one who could see through his closed eyes was the reason behind those tears) Kyu apni hi maut ka natak kar rahe ho tum? Kyu sabse chupne ki koshish kar rahe ho? Maine toh sab ko kaha tha ki 'Abhijeet nahi mara... Mera dil kehta hai' lekin kisi ne vishwas nahi kiya. Achaa hai nahi kiya vishwas... Kam se kam sab log tumhe meri halat ka doshi toh nahi manege. Agar team ko pata chal gaya toh woh tumhe arrest toh nahi kar lenge na!? Attempt to murder ke jurm mai! (The very thought shook him to the core... He didn't want Abhijeet to be arrested, he never wanted this to happen... Not even if Abhijeet had attempted to kill him) Kuch toh karna padega! Kuch bhi karke mujhe tumhe iss musibat se bahar nikalna hi padega.
(Even after Abhijeet fired on him all that he thought about was how to save Abhijeet... No wonder why people say friendship is the strongest relation in the world. The one who attempted to kill Daya was crying and prying for his recovery and the one who had a bullet wound was thinking about how to save the one who gave him this wound! Even the brothers from same mother, who share the same blood, nowadays don't have such a pure relation... But these two shared one! Why? Because this relation was made by heart and not by blood. Not destiny but they chose each other.)
*Beach*
(Here on the seashore Abhijeet was sitting on a rock. Trying to figure out his own problems)
Abhijeet (in his thoughts) - Thank you so much God thank you so much... Daya coma se bahar aa gaya! Isse zayada kushi ki baat aur kya ho sakti hai mere liye. (Suddenly a thought came to his mind and his forehead became sweaty) Kahi daya ne ACP sir yaa phir team mai se kisi ko bata toh nahi diya ki uspar maine goli chalayi thi! Aise toh unhe pata chal jayega ki mai zinda hu! Nahi mujhe daya ko rokna hoga... Kaise bhi karke mujhe daya ko team ko batane se rokna hoga. (Moving his hand on his watch or better say Daya's watch that he took from him) Am sorry dost tujhe thodi aur taklif uthani padegi... Mere liye! Am sorry! Mai kuch nahi kar sakta
Determined! After a long time Abhijeet felt the strength in himself to be determined... After all his 'strength', his 'daya' was back in his senses... Although not near him but who needs to be close when they can be one another even when they are miles away... But he didn't know that his Daya hadn't told anything to the team! He was as determined as him... Because he wanted to save his Abhijeet... Once again! From the whole world!
(Sitting there on the rock without realizing Abhijeet got lost in the flashback again)
*Flashback*
Few days after Abhijeet received the letter from Rajeev, Abhijeet started investigating the case. He went to the resort where Rajeev heard the terrorists talking... Enquired, checked and did every possible thing. He had not informed the team about all this and was doing it secretly.
One fine night he was going back from a crime scene to his house. It was a long way and passed through the jungle. He was alone in the car and was moving swiftly on the empty road... It was past midnight and the already not so busy road was deserted now. Suddenly he saw a huge tree fallen on the road blocking his way. The sharp mind of Sr. Insp Abhijeet started working instantly...
Abhijeet (talking to himself) - Na barish hai na hawa chal rahi hai toh yeh jhaad raste pe aise kaise gir gaya... Kuch toh gadbad hai... Bina wajah itna bada jhaad nahi gir sakta
He started looking around without coming out of his car but couldn't see anything suspicious... But suddenly he heard a vehicle coming from behind... Looking back he saw a truck with uncontrollable speed coming towards his car. He was quick enough to react... Putting his car in back gear he moved behind and took a U turn... But to his surprise even the truck took a U turn and started racing behind him. By then he had understood that the truck was there for him or better say to kill him! Showing his excellent driving skills Abhijeet started racing on the road... The car which was previously moving at a speed of 50 - 60 was now moving at a speed of 90 - 100... He was escaping the truck well but didn't know that this was not all that the criminals had planned for him... There came some another 5 - 6 cars from no where and started moving with his speed. But again its not so easy to outwit the second in command of CID Mumbai! He once again proved the power of his car and excellence of his brain. Escaping all of them he was racing ahead. But he didn't have the slightest idea that the culprits must have also blocked the way he came from and after a while he saw another huge tree on the road blocking his way! Behind him were the criminals chasing him and in front, his way to escape was blocked completely. Running into the forest was useless as he knew that the people who planned so much for him would have already made their goons sit in the jungle waiting for him... But he knew what to do!
He put his car in back gear once again... Moved some distance behind, kept his foot on the accelerator... Pressed it hard... Attained a high speed and dashed his car into a tree! There was a huge crashing sound but all he could hear was silence... He felt a hot fluid flowing out from his head... Pieces of glass pricing all over his body... The tips of his fingers and toes turning numb and eyes denying to open... The last thing he remembered was that those cars which were chasing him, came, checked that he would die in no time with all those injuries and left saying 'Yeh toh kudh hi mar gaya re'
To be continued...
Upar maine jo bhi Abhijeet sir ke saath kiya uske liye sorry! App log mujhse naraz ho usse pehle hi sorry... Kya karu even i I didn't want to do any such thing with our beloved Abhijeet sir but it was important for the story, so i had to do it.
Now am done with my work and now it's your turn to do your work. You all know na what am talking about? Review! Next update will come next week till then enjoy this one... Keep watching CID and let me enjoy your reviews. Bye!
Srishti Jee u made Abhijeet character even more stronger, your characterisation is fantastic, just mind blowing blog but I think this one is shorter than old ones , but happy , u posted it within a week , ++ my old comments, I Eagerly wait for the next one , u r the only who understand.the feeling of we Cidians .
ReplyDeleteI didn't make Abhijeet's character strong, CID's writers did and its Aditya sir who portrayed it so well... I just presented him as i see him... Thanks for your comments 😊 and its because i am a CIDian i knw what all of us wish to see... Hope am upto ur expectations
DeleteOnes again u proved that u r d perfect script writer.. Plz continue writing coz ur articles have generated reading skills in me.. Thank U ����
ReplyDeleteThank u😊... Its just a small attempt from my side... Happy that you liked it... Keep reading and reviewing
DeleteDear Sristhi,
ReplyDeleteOnce again very much moved from the writing. And yes All the emotions have taken the real shape. Thats exactly how the cops thinks. 👍👍
Some brilliant use of words i find. For example 2nd in command in Cid. Etc..
And yes our super cops dont even take a fraction of second to slay their lives for duty whch is well proved. Tbe chase reminded me of "Abhijit ka Inteqam " wala case. There was no truck i know 😌 .
U have started inspiring mny just like our CID including me amng many. So now u r a socail model whose tender sholders hve taken up responsibilty to make people awre about life n trust.
Yes will be waiting impatiently. Once again.
God bless😊😍😍😘👍
Happy that i was able to remind you of one of the best cases in the history of CID 😊... And inspire! Thanks dear but its not me and the cast and crew of CID who did this... Thanks again 😊 for your reviews mean a lot to me
DeleteDear Sristhi,
ReplyDeleteOnce again very much moved from the writing. And yes All the emotions have taken the real shape. Thats exactly how the cops thinks. 👍👍
Some brilliant use of words i find. For example 2nd in command in Cid. Etc..
And yes our super cops dont even take a fraction of second to slay their lives for duty whch is well proved. Tbe chase reminded me of "Abhijit ka Inteqam " wala case. There was no truck i know 😌 .
U have started inspiring mny just like our CID including me amng many. So now u r a socail model whose tender sholders hve taken up responsibilty to make people awre about life n trust.
Yes will be waiting impatiently. Once again.
God bless😊😍😍😘👍
Wow sristhi....Awesome chapter...
ReplyDeleteJust love the way you described Abhijeet....
Extremely excited for next update soon..... Hope Next Update will be li'l long..... Thanks for the update.
Thanks... Next update will come by the next week... Sorry for the keeping you all wait but i can't help it... And about the length of the chapter I can't commit anything as even I don't know how long it will be😊... Keep reading and reviewing 😊
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